Evidence for Thesis #1:
The fact that Mr. Mallard was coming home like nothing had happened and
didn't even know of the events that took place that day suggests that he was
somewhere he shouldn't have been. Maybe at a mistresses house which would
acounct for his lask of knowlegde of the train accent. This idea is futher
supported by the clear fact that Mrs. Mallard is unhappy in her marrige due to
her husbands actions. While it was acceptiable for men to have mistreses, wives
often disagreed but were unable to do anything about it. Chopin puts this is
the story on proupse to show the lack of equalitly among the sexes durring that
time.

Evidence for Thesis #2:
While Mrs. Mallard is coming to the realivzation that she is going to have
freedom in her life thanks to her husbands death she is still imprsoned in the
social structures of the time. Only in the confines of her room where no one
can see can she full emerise herself in her new found freedom. She can only
view her new life through the window thus showing her imprisoned state. She
can't tough her freedom, just look at it. The inablity to allow herself to show
her freedom in public shows that she is still confined by what is considered
socially acceptiable and therefor can not fully embrase her new life.
Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI would say that you definitely picked out two elements from the story that could be used as support for the thesis statments you chose. Of course, if this were an actual essay, you would definitely cite specific sentences, etc. to truly offer up evidence from the text, but the beginning ideas here surely fulfill the requirements of this exercise! Nice job!